April 12, 2004
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The rest of the story….

When I told about my first trip into Sears to return that Craftsman
“lifetime” guaranteed shovel, I left out an important part. It
was unrelated to the shovel business itself but has proven to be one of
the most memorable aspects of the whole affair. I think this may
stay with me for the rest of my life.After I had exchanged my shovel for the first “gift card” refund for
less than I’d originally paid for it, I walked around the store looking
for something to buy with it, since they didn’t have any shovels of the
type I need. In the electronics department every screen there was
showing the same movie, Finding Nemo. I got there just in time for the dramatic climax and happy ending.I’m really glad it happened that way. Some people might have
considered that a spoiler, but I’m not one of those people. For
example, when I was reading Stephen King’s The Shining,
once I got into the dramatic tension of the “REDRUM” incidents I turned
to the end and read the last three pages. If it had turned out
differently, if the sympathetic protagonists had not survived, I
wouldn’t have wanted to finish reading the book. However, knowing
that things did turn out okay in the end, I was able to read on and
enjoy the plot developments. In my mind I associate that desire to know that things will come out okay in the end with Bambi,
a movie I saw as a small child. I was profoundly affected by the
murder of Bambi’s mother. I don’t think I ever fully got over it.I tend to really become immersed in stories. I feel what the
dramatists want me to feel. I’m maybe not the ideal audience
because I can be jolted right out of my willing suspension of disbelief
by a particularly egregious floater, but a well constructed plot and
competent performance can suck me in and hold me rapt throughout.
I saw enough of the end of Finding Nemo
to be sucked in, to care about that little fish. And from his
heroic actions there at the end I have taken an image and a phrase that
will stay with me and inspire me, and I suppose may allow me to inspire
others at difficult moments for the rest of my life: “…just
keep swimming.”On my walk through Sears that day I didn’t find anything that I really
wanted in the price range of my little plastic token. Likewise on
a similar walkthrough when I’d gone back and got the rest of the refund
after I’d complained about the shortage to Sears Central. I had
the card in my wallet for a week or so, when one day I had a bright
idea. One of my NA sponsees and her husband are new to the area,
trying to establish themselves and furnish an apartment, and she is
pregnant. Last week at a meeting, I told her my shovel story and
gave her the $35.00 card. Her face lit up with a smile, she
hugged me and did a little happy dance and crooned, “I’ll get things
for the baby.” That was, I thought, the appropriate happy ending
to the story.Then a few days later, on two successive days I got a series of calls
on the machine, three each day, that Caller ID told me came from Sears
Central. They left no message. The following day,
someone did leave a message saying they had been trying to contact me
to find out if my dispute had been resolved to my satisfaction, but
their calls kept being sent to my voice mail. Well, DUH! It
took her two days and six calls to figure out what voice mail was
for. The quality of help these days!Briefly, I had an impulse to email Sears Central with the link to the story
of the two employees scheming on how to give me the money without
having the auditors down on them, and the other employee insulting
me. I even mentioned the impulse to Doug, but said to him, “that
would just be mean.” He agreed, and Greyfox agreed later when I
told him of my impulse, so I guess that’s the end of that story.
Comments (7)
Nice ending.
Well, I didn’t jump down to the end of your story to find out if it ended happily, I just “kept swimming” until the end.
I’m glad the broken shovel ended up planting something for a new life. I like the idea of balance … and this little story satisfied that need in me.
I loved your little story because it had so many of the plot points I like in literature- intrique, a crisis point, characters to care about etc. You did a good thing there by giving away your gift card to someone who did need it. As Hannibal from the ATeam says “I love it when a plan comes together.”
okay…so the guilt i’ve been harboring over my suggestion leading you to stand in line and take on Sears the idiots is gone. Whew!
Do you know that the Bambi/mom thing never sank in with me? I’ve always been hit hard by the dad coming to get him…but when his mom dies, it’s never affected me. No idea why. (Of course, sit me down to watch Black Beauty or the remake of The Incredible Journey and I become a blubbering snot ball in no time flat.)
Kathy? That was nice what you did, but you know that.
That was a really nice gesture
My kids, being from the newer generation, do know the Bambi story, however, were more saddened by “Littlefoot” in the Land Before Time movie series losing his mother….
If you haven’t ever watched the whole thing, I completely recommend watching Finding Nemo….even though I’ve seen it so many times I’m absolutely sick of it, lol…but, toddlers latch on to their favorite movies. He knows it so well, that he even sings the song at the end, “Beyond the Sea”…crazy kid.
I get so frustrated every time I hear someone having problems with customer service…it’s not like it’s a hard job. Yes, we get angry customers, but not every customer is angry, and you don’t have to treat every customer like an idiot, even if the last one was. I’m sorry that you had to deal with people that didn’t know what they’re doing…although it makes me laugh that she “tried to call you, but kept getting your voicemail.”…well, duh, leave a message like everyone else, lady. Maybe, one day, they’ll learn what courtesy is, too.
“Customer Service begins with a smile and ends with “Thank You”"
oh, and I was going to mention, but didn’t because for some reason I can’t even remember my name half the time today….it’s strange that movies that we remember from our childhood reflect the way we take in literature and film. I wonder what kind of an effect it will have on my son, too….the only movie that ever made him cry was Balto…I’ve never seen it, but I had it on for him on Christmas while I was cooking the extravaganza dinner that almost drove me insane, lol….but we had it on, and there was a part where Balto was sad because the little girl didn’t have the medicine he needed…and my son just started crying…he was so sad…so, now, I screen all movies for their “sadness” quotient…I didn’t realize just how sensitive of a little guy I had!!
anyway, lol…have a great night!